blog assigment3

I think most helpful comment is I needs  to have a space to write dialogue. Because I don't have many dialogue and it is to small and I need more space to write. Dialogue is one of the important part of writing and I think I need to show more clear dialogue with leave more space.

How can I imporve my writting

I can improve by more checking my work or think more because I'm not checking my work and think more idea. But I think I'm not good but I'm more batter than last year because last year I can even write 100 or 200 words but now I' need more improve I can write more than300 or 400 words. I think my personal narrative is very boring because I tells lot of moment and there is not many dialogue. If mt grammar is wrong I tell teacher or ask my mother to ask what is wrong and how can I change.

Blog Assignment 1

1-I think I'm good at look audience and slow talking. But I think i need more improve in talk cleary and don't afraid about speech

2-I interesting Daily's book's and author because there is a lot of problem but the main character solve problem it's why book is very interesting

3-Grace darling,fiction.