Question for debate

1.I was good at voice and tone.
2.I should improve by talking more clearly.
3.I like Daily's speech because his claim and evidence was very good.
4.I enjoy speech because I thought debate was very fun and interesting.
5. I don't like my speech because I can't speak very clearly and my claim and evidence need more information

Personal Narrative

Choi's Final)

Blog Assignment4

I think I'm good at choose one story and stretch that use a lot of dialogue but I think I need to write sensory words. And one more thing that I need to improve is use past tense and make space to write dialogue and sensory words

blog assigment3

I think most helpful comment is I needs  to have a space to write dialogue. Because I don't have many dialogue and it is to small and I need more space to write. Dialogue is one of the important part of writing and I think I need to show more clear dialogue with leave more space.

How can I imporve my writting

I can improve by more checking my work or think more because I'm not checking my work and think more idea. But I think I'm not good but I'm more batter than last year because last year I can even write 100 or 200 words but now I' need more improve I can write more than300 or 400 words. I think my personal narrative is very boring because I tells lot of moment and there is not many dialogue. If mt grammar is wrong I tell teacher or ask my mother to ask what is wrong and how can I change.

Blog Assignment 1

1-I think I'm good at look audience and slow talking. But I think i need more improve in talk cleary and don't afraid about speech

2-I interesting Daily's book's and author because there is a lot of problem but the main character solve problem it's why book is very interesting

3-Grace darling,fiction.